Hey Tommy,
You didn't really specify this clearly in your initial request.
The original macro already has code to show the note – you just have to uncomment it in the AppleScript.
When I wrote it I was using macOS 12.14.6 Sierra, and show was not available in the Notes app on that system – hence the comment in the AppleScript:
# Requires Mojave (maybe High Sierra) or later.
Give this macro a try.
Make New Apple Note with Content and Bring to Front for Editing v1.00.kmmacros (8.5 KB)
The code to move focus to the editing panel may not work past Mojave without adjustment.
-Chris